HGRHBURHBJRKDFJKGHFDJKGHFDJKGHJKDSFKGFD I MUST HAVE REWROTE THIS LIKE TEN TIMES do you know how hard it is to try to write decent poems with writer's block you guys like it isn't even possible and yet..........here i am...............a True Champion
Tomorrow is the fourth day of two things: a) school and b) the return of the sources of my inspiration!! QvQ Which is both a good thing and a bad thing for me but good for you guys because I'm pretty sure you're all anxious to read my poems?????????? which is just WOW!!!!!! but anyways... have another moon poem (not like most of the other ones haven't been moon poems, but i never really mentioned that in them!!) because it's been WWAYYYYYYYYYY too long since I've been able to do the poems i used to do before school got out. -explodes- -explodes louder- -gracefully pirouettes into active volcano because my eMOTIONS THEY'RE HAPPENING AGAIN GUYS YOU'RE GONNA BE WIPED OUT WITH A POETRY TIDAL WAVE MAYBE SOON POSSIBLY HOPEFULLY-
Oh and a few more things about this poem: When I last logged on here there was a deviation on the homepage titled something around the lines of "if only home wasn't so far" or something like that and I loved the name and i thought it sounded like a great title that would fit in with the concept of the poem i wanted to write so i.... i stole it oops fdkghjkgfdkjgdfh Also this poem was heavily inspired not only by real life events but the song Afterlife by Ingrid Michaelson, which happens to be my current theme song!!! So if you listen to that and read the lyrics of that song which are in the description and then read my poem (or vice versa???) then it should be more effective and emotional and yadayadayada pea you're blabbinG AGAIN (my favorite part is the bridge which really inspired the poem but there are other parts that work for this too!)
As always thank you so much for reading!!! I'm so honored that you guys have supported me so much and how do i have 30 watchers like woW THAT'S MORE THAN I EVER EXPECTED THANK YOUUUUUUUUU!!!! <3333333 And thank you for any potential support as well oh my gosh it makes my heart explode to see your loVEEEEEEEE <333333333 8'DDDDD
(Now that dA has incorporated tags into their system I'll be tagging all of my moon poems with #meandthemoon so if you search that you'll get to see all of them!! <33333)
Moon poem I adore ii., it has such gorgeous imagery... when I read it, I feel like I get caught in the moment you describe. "the nothings and the fireflies and the rawness in each of my breaths" is just... *endless swooning* I'd like to live in those lines. Also, I have a crazy fancy for the word "meander" and I adore you for using it here, especially in the combination with "maze".
A tiny, tiny thing I noticed, and I hope it doesn't ruin my praise - but isn't "heard" in the fourth line of the second stanza supposed to be "hard"? or maybe I'm just too stupid to imagine how a heart beats heard? oh I'm sorry, lovely -.-
PS: I loooooove you ^.~ Remember that, poet blossoming in moonlight. And stay inspired.
Thank you thank you thanKKK YOUUUUUUUUUU AHHSRKFGJHJGHFDJKGHKDFJGFDHGFJKH Thank you sooo much! I'm so happy you like it!! 8'DDD
Oh my gosh you're right, oops!!! Thank you so much! I'll go fix that right away!! 8'D
PS. I LOVEE YOU TOOOOOO <3333333 Oh my gosh thank you so much!! (i love the part about blossoming in moonlight and mark my words i WILL use that in another moon poem because wow that is such a wonderful line!!!!)
You're very welcome! Gosh, this is so gorgeous. Thank YOU for writing it! ^^
Wow. Without that typo, this has reached 120% of perfection. My mind is starting to melt... ahhhhhhh you know what?! I'll print it out and hang it above my desk! Or I'll write it down into one of my notebooks to carry around... only if you're okay with that, of course.
(whaaaaaa noo I'll EXPLODE if you use my words in one of your poems, that'd be too great an honour! Really, I couldn't stand that.)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WHWHAHHAHHHTTTT i'm totally okay with that but my brAIN HAS EXPLODED WITH SPARKLES AND AND LOTS OF COLORS AND KITTENS AND RAINBOWS BECAUSE WOW THATS SO SWEET OF YOU!! you're the second person i know of who will / has already done that and i literally am so honored i just WWWOOOWOOWOWWOW!!! <333333
nnoOOOOO i must because the mETAPHORS THEY WORK PERFECTLY and metaphors trump eeeeeeverrryyyythinnggg B')))) <3333333333